Warrior Princess

Aw! This poem is so sweet! I love how you describe the setting and the little girl. These lines were my favorites: "you could still see her frozen cheeks, where ...

This was simply beautiful. The imagery is both vague and evocative, presenting a translucent mirage of blue and white. I'm still a little hazy on what it's actually about, but ...

I didn't exactly understand how the three stanzas connect to each other; but maybe that's one of those "you'd have to know about it" scenarios. I thought the poem was ...

This poem was definitely amusing. Actually, at the beginning I thought it was going to be serious and poetic, like most of my poems about the ocean; but then it ...

Whoa...this is one heck of a poem...or should I say three? I must admit I had no idea what in the world you were talking about half the time, but ...

Well, welcome to the weird, wild, and wonderful world of poetry, dear! I am really hesitant to seriously critique anything here, as it is my personal belief that poetry is, ...

Oh my goodness. This is a wonderful poem. It obviously is very scatterbrained, but that happens to me more often than I want to think about: I feel so much, ...

Wow, I found this poem a bit disturbing, illustrating what very likely were the speaker's final moments. Your detail and tension are both very good. One thing I would suggest ...

Wow, that was...different. Very, very different. In a good way. I'm not going to pretend I really understood it, but that's not always a bad thing. I suppose it was ...

Aw!! This poem is so sweet and funny; it made me smile. I thought of my own dog while reading it, a golden retriever who is utterly obsessed with me ...

Hm, I like this. I don't quite get the "daughter" thing, maybe you could tell us a little more about the person whose daughter she is? BUt the girl is ...

OH MY GOSH. That was probably the most beautiful thing I have read this year. Your imagery is lovely and dreamlike, absolutely fitting. I really can't find anything to critique ...

This poem was both sad and amusing in its own special way. I'm afraid it doesn't evoke much sympathy in me, as I love the stars and am a total ...

Haha. How quaint! Short and sweet; I liked it. The thing is, if you were dying and you pulled your lover close and whispered "I...L...Y" it's quite possible they might ...

Haha!! I liked this. It was witty and imaginative, and I think it's sweet that you wrote it for your grandparents, of all people. I mean, nobody seems to do ...